11-07-2022, 11:39 PM
darktiste: Excellent feedback as always. I agree with everything, including the occlusion shadows. In general I reserve those for late during the painting process and sometimes I do indeed forget to apply them everywhere, such was the case here as well. I'll try to be more conscious of this for future paintings! Great points regarding the grass as well, I heavily reworked it and am hoping it looks much better now!
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I took a look at this piece after a few days and wasn't entirely satisfied with it, so I reworked it significantly. I tried to make the values more pleasing and natural and enhanced the colors a bit, and also heavily reworked the grass. I'm pleased with it now, but any final feedback would be welcome so please let me know!
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I took a look at this piece after a few days and wasn't entirely satisfied with it, so I reworked it significantly. I tried to make the values more pleasing and natural and enhanced the colors a bit, and also heavily reworked the grass. I'm pleased with it now, but any final feedback would be welcome so please let me know!