12-22-2022, 06:33 AM
Nice work! The piece is looking stronger now for sure!
Some of the nit picks i would have at this point would be the hard rim light on the her left leg (viewers right leg from quiver to bottom of her bootcuff) at the minute is just looks layed down with little regard to material, texture, or fabric folds. I would neither blur it a little bit to soften it or work it into the Fabic folds a tad more. Following this for all the rim lighting could also help really push her form more.
The last small thing sticking out to me would be her right leg shape, it feels like the shin bone could be a little too bowed inwards from her knee cap but that could just be me.
Quick paint over to help…or not :)
All in all nice work and looking forward to your next piece dude.
Some of the nit picks i would have at this point would be the hard rim light on the her left leg (viewers right leg from quiver to bottom of her bootcuff) at the minute is just looks layed down with little regard to material, texture, or fabric folds. I would neither blur it a little bit to soften it or work it into the Fabic folds a tad more. Following this for all the rim lighting could also help really push her form more.
The last small thing sticking out to me would be her right leg shape, it feels like the shin bone could be a little too bowed inwards from her knee cap but that could just be me.
Quick paint over to help…or not :)
All in all nice work and looking forward to your next piece dude.