01-09-2023, 07:48 AM
Good start, her pelvis region reads better now due to the skin break which wasn’t obvious in the sketch, and she looks less awkwardly twisted now. But I think it looked clearer with him straddling the trunk and not side saddling it as he is now. But I guess it all depends on what action they are doing, is he just holding her? Or are they knock’n boots? If it’s the later you might want to consider having the trunk moved to the FG possibly which might give him a less “im just gonna hump your leg you don’t mind right?” vibe ;) but you chose a pretty tough pose so kudos for giving it a go!
Also I think if the two skin tones were a little more contrasting it would help with the readability. I think a little ash, or a cooler grey added to her would look cool. Good luck with one dude
Also I think if the two skin tones were a little more contrasting it would help with the readability. I think a little ash, or a cooler grey added to her would look cool. Good luck with one dude