01-15-2023, 04:40 AM
The last piece turned out great! Love the bark texture you went with its well done throughout. I would only have a few small things that stick out to me, one is her ear, it being the only thing that didn’t get hit with the bark makes it really stand out. Maybe a transition there could help mesh it more with her body, or possibly just bring a bit of the green into it.
The other thing is would be his skin, right now it has little bit of a smoothed clay feel to it. Comes down to personal approach on skin and from your other renders I have seen you render skin with a more intentional variance (texture, shine, sweat, veins, fibers etc.), maybe with some blues and pink undertones to break up the brown on the larger areas. But like I said it’s personal choice and the piece looks great. The leaves really do add a lot to this one.
One last one might just be totally me but his FG foot does give off a floating appearance at the minute. It might just be that leaf that is right below it is looking like it’s right under it and in its cast shadow.
The new portrait looks strong, no crits at all from me
The other thing is would be his skin, right now it has little bit of a smoothed clay feel to it. Comes down to personal approach on skin and from your other renders I have seen you render skin with a more intentional variance (texture, shine, sweat, veins, fibers etc.), maybe with some blues and pink undertones to break up the brown on the larger areas. But like I said it’s personal choice and the piece looks great. The leaves really do add a lot to this one.
One last one might just be totally me but his FG foot does give off a floating appearance at the minute. It might just be that leaf that is right below it is looking like it’s right under it and in its cast shadow.
The new portrait looks strong, no crits at all from me