01-24-2023, 08:56 AM
The last piece turned out really nice. the changes you made to the gold armor is really nice and a good addition as well as the skin color variety really help with a more realistic effect. I feel there are few tiny things for me that stand out to me at the minute that could make the piece a little stringer. the biggest one being the rendering on the throne stick elements poking out. at the minute they look a little unfinished, maybe thats due to the softer edges on them but i think if they were a little more defined to be able to see what material they are that would help.
and one last thing would be the shading on his dong drapery, not sure if thats the PC term for it :) since its attaches to him at this waist it gives the impression that it falls straight down and does not break at the seats edge. maybe a little more of a transition with the lighting might help this effect and in turn give him the impression of sitting deeper into the chair. but i guess i dont know what material it is so take that with a grain of salt.
no additional comments on your new piece aside from the perspective issues Dartiste pointed out. well maybe the right index finger on the staff is a tad fat, but the rest looks good to go.
and one last thing would be the shading on his dong drapery, not sure if thats the PC term for it :) since its attaches to him at this waist it gives the impression that it falls straight down and does not break at the seats edge. maybe a little more of a transition with the lighting might help this effect and in turn give him the impression of sitting deeper into the chair. but i guess i dont know what material it is so take that with a grain of salt.
no additional comments on your new piece aside from the perspective issues Dartiste pointed out. well maybe the right index finger on the staff is a tad fat, but the rest looks good to go.