03-04-2023, 09:38 PM
CBinnsIllustration: Thank you! Great feedback as well, agree with pretty much everything and your paintover works really well in illustrating your input. I just incorporated and it works much better, thanks again!
darktiste: Great input! I don't want the rain to be too overpowering, but I agree that the fog could add to the mood a bit as shown with your paintover, and it works quite well! Did some subtle shading to the dress to introduce more skin tone colors to give it a very slight transparent feel, I don't want to take it too far as I don't want her to appear to sexual given the theme. I reworked the fingers a bit so hopefully they work better now as well!
Leo Ki: I'll try to take it easier! :D Glad you dig the color choices for the previous sci-fi piece! Glad you like the changes made the recent illustration as well, thanks again for your kind words and support, very much appreciate it!
dimensional-knight: Thank you! Great advice in regards to the hands, and the pics you posted were very helpful in that regard, thanks for taking the time to do that! I reworked them a bit and I'm hopeful they work better now!
Lydo: I agree about the stiff poses. In general I have a reference for the general pose which I try to recreate. In this case I had several references but none that I took on my own specific for this illustration which I now regret not doing. I love the sketches you illustrated, and I will definitely be applying your feedback for future pieces! Great work with the paintover as well, I usually think in shadows/darks to help define form but sometimes it doesn't compliment the skin quite well as shown with your image. I incorporated some of the lighter tones to the face, hopefully it's an improvement!
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Some really great feedback I've received! Thanks everyone for taking the time to help me improve the image, really means a lot to me! I will also be applying some of the critiques for future illustrations as well, so hopefully my images can improve further as I go along. I updated the illustration and I feel it works much better now, and I think I'm calling it finished now unless something really major is off, so feel free to let me know! Below is the update!
darktiste: Great input! I don't want the rain to be too overpowering, but I agree that the fog could add to the mood a bit as shown with your paintover, and it works quite well! Did some subtle shading to the dress to introduce more skin tone colors to give it a very slight transparent feel, I don't want to take it too far as I don't want her to appear to sexual given the theme. I reworked the fingers a bit so hopefully they work better now as well!
Leo Ki: I'll try to take it easier! :D Glad you dig the color choices for the previous sci-fi piece! Glad you like the changes made the recent illustration as well, thanks again for your kind words and support, very much appreciate it!
dimensional-knight: Thank you! Great advice in regards to the hands, and the pics you posted were very helpful in that regard, thanks for taking the time to do that! I reworked them a bit and I'm hopeful they work better now!
Lydo: I agree about the stiff poses. In general I have a reference for the general pose which I try to recreate. In this case I had several references but none that I took on my own specific for this illustration which I now regret not doing. I love the sketches you illustrated, and I will definitely be applying your feedback for future pieces! Great work with the paintover as well, I usually think in shadows/darks to help define form but sometimes it doesn't compliment the skin quite well as shown with your image. I incorporated some of the lighter tones to the face, hopefully it's an improvement!
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Some really great feedback I've received! Thanks everyone for taking the time to help me improve the image, really means a lot to me! I will also be applying some of the critiques for future illustrations as well, so hopefully my images can improve further as I go along. I updated the illustration and I feel it works much better now, and I think I'm calling it finished now unless something really major is off, so feel free to let me know! Below is the update!