CGMythology's Sketchbook

[Dominicque]

As always your lines are always super clean, but your characters seem to be stiff still. Maybe you try doing some quick gestures of the poses you're after to make it feel more looser and full of action, rather than a stiff model posing? For this why don't you look up some parkour videos or see if you can see 'inbetweens' It fits with the Assassin's Creed theme, which does come through in her design.
I agree with Leo and Knight about her cape, more air flow under it, either looks bigger or should be higher and look 'billowy'. There also seems to be something 'off' in the hood area, but it may have something to do wit perspective. Look for hand holding a dagger or look at your own holding something with a (similar) handle. The fingers are bunched up to appear there's a finger missing.

You're not scared of backgrounds which is nice to see! Interested to see this develop.