03-21-2023, 12:52 AM
Hi, sorry to pile on :p I love your sketchbook and really admire how complex and MANY your works are. I like the idea and composition of your latest sketch, the perspective of the backgrounds and birds swirling up is really nice and dynamic. Aside from the stiffness in the pose I feel like the clothing is somehow a little pasted-on? I understand it would be tight for purpose but it seems to follow every contour of the body in places where it might bunch and gather a bit more (Knight addressed this in their over drawing). And the knives as mentioned look a bit awkward and 2 dimensional. Maybe you could incorporate some holsters over the top of the straps rather than underneath so they wouldn't be digging into the thighs? Otherwise, I love her attitude.