03-23-2023, 11:55 PM
darktiste: That sounds like a good idea, I might try it out (hands holding objects and such). I also appreciate your roasts as well lol. I made the changes based on your input, hopefully things look more natural now.
Leo Ki: Glad to hear it! Great point regarding the cape, just expanded it so hopefully it looks more dynamic now. Reworked the perspective a bit for the background as well. Great input, thank you!
dimensional-knight: Your paintover is awesome and you made some great points. Just incorporated it with the new pose, thanks again!
Dominicque: Yep, some of my figure work is a bit stiff. I'll try to exaggerate the gesture lines in the future to help avoid this for future pieces. Made some changes to the hand as well, thanks for your input as always!
Lydo: That's a great point regarding the L gesture, the paintover you posted works much better, much more dynamic and helps illustrate your point immensely. I incorporated it to the sketch and I'm very happy with how the gesture improved, so thanks a ton for that!!
VorpalBug: Thank you! Great points as well, revised the sketch a bit so hopefully it works better now!
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First off, a big thank you to everyone who took the time to commend on the sketch, it was ridiculously helpful so I'm incredibly grateful. I reworked the sketch significantly and did my best to incorporate all the feedback, and I feel it's a substantial improvement. Attached the updated sketch below. I'm ready to begin doing some quick color tests but I'm open to any final feedback before I do so as well, so if something is significantly off please feel free to let me know!
Leo Ki: Glad to hear it! Great point regarding the cape, just expanded it so hopefully it looks more dynamic now. Reworked the perspective a bit for the background as well. Great input, thank you!
dimensional-knight: Your paintover is awesome and you made some great points. Just incorporated it with the new pose, thanks again!
Dominicque: Yep, some of my figure work is a bit stiff. I'll try to exaggerate the gesture lines in the future to help avoid this for future pieces. Made some changes to the hand as well, thanks for your input as always!
Lydo: That's a great point regarding the L gesture, the paintover you posted works much better, much more dynamic and helps illustrate your point immensely. I incorporated it to the sketch and I'm very happy with how the gesture improved, so thanks a ton for that!!
VorpalBug: Thank you! Great points as well, revised the sketch a bit so hopefully it works better now!
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First off, a big thank you to everyone who took the time to commend on the sketch, it was ridiculously helpful so I'm incredibly grateful. I reworked the sketch significantly and did my best to incorporate all the feedback, and I feel it's a substantial improvement. Attached the updated sketch below. I'm ready to begin doing some quick color tests but I'm open to any final feedback before I do so as well, so if something is significantly off please feel free to let me know!