need some in depth crit on this

[Mr. Toodles]

I would say there's to much focus on minor details in the design of the armor, and not enough work on the forms of the figures. What I mean by this is that certain parts of your lighting doesn't really add to the illusion of three dimensional form. areas like the girls chin seem to almost run from the back of her ear all the way to the other side of her head without a change in how the light hits her face

try working on foreshortening as well the direction of the girls arm with the bow seems like its not exactly facing the viewer and instead off to the side