04-14-2023, 10:41 PM
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Nice zoo studies, I love the almost chiseled look of the lines. For the figures, watch out the limbs lengths and curvature. They have enough volume and outline seems ok, but they're curved beyond what bone would allow sometimes and it's not helping their flow. If you want dynamism focus on the torso and involve the pelvis more in the movement.
To express movement, choose the type of line and the direction with care. Check out this slide created for Tangled vis dev, courtesy of Glen Keane.
![[Image: tumblr_nh21ewxvRY1t2ae3oo4_1280.jpg]](https://64.media.tumblr.com/1dad524920dbf3bc47d69e2076883e25/tumblr_nh21ewxvRY1t2ae3oo4_1280.jpg)
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These two posts I randomly found are also worth reading. They explain a few concepts of rhythm well: The road of rythm, Offset curves.
![[Image: 1819_12_22-abstract-sketch-human-body.jpg]](https://www.joshuanava.biz/life/images/1819_12_22-abstract-sketch-human-body.jpg)
![[Image: IofL.jpg]](https://photos1.blogger.com/blogger/1250/2135/1600/IofL.jpg)
Don't forget to tell us what you're seeking to improve so we can better help.
Nice zoo studies, I love the almost chiseled look of the lines. For the figures, watch out the limbs lengths and curvature. They have enough volume and outline seems ok, but they're curved beyond what bone would allow sometimes and it's not helping their flow. If you want dynamism focus on the torso and involve the pelvis more in the movement.
To express movement, choose the type of line and the direction with care. Check out this slide created for Tangled vis dev, courtesy of Glen Keane.
(full post)
These two posts I randomly found are also worth reading. They explain a few concepts of rhythm well: The road of rythm, Offset curves.
Don't forget to tell us what you're seeking to improve so we can better help.