CGMythology's Sketchbook

[CBinnsIllustration]

Hey dude nice sketch! I don’t have a ton of time for a better PO but wanted to give my two cents of how you could make the image a bit more dynamic. Personally I think I would like to see more of the mermaids tail and possible backside. It could help with the foreshortening and showing the direct attack angle. I would also lift her left shoulder ( viewers right) possibly. The big tail fin right now is a little hard to see being her tail as it would be huge to still be this big and being connected to her. Letting it made off onto the depths could be cool to see you render.

Also throwing the silhouette on there helps show the line of motion a bit more helping with points on interest and the dynamic feel.

But just my two cents, I’m sure your rendering of this would be beautiful regardless of where you take it. Good luck my dude.