07-15-2023, 12:00 AM
The new piece is looking cool I like the pose on the whole and I’m sure your rendering will make this one pop, couple things bothering me however. I would look at the foreground hand and arm relationship a bit more. Right now it kind of reads like she has a giant hand, as it doesn’t quite match the limited foreshortening in her arm. Also the hips and legs relationship are reading a little off at the minute. Perhaps this is exaggerated due them being obscured so my mind is trying to fill in the gaps and just can’t, but feel like they could use a little tweak. Without seeing your reference it’s tricky to know if this just an illusion. I’m not able to attempt a PO to show what I mean at the minute but thought I would point it out. Good luck with the piece.