08-03-2023, 11:23 PM
Hey I loved the Kitana piece, you did a great job on her eyes especially.
On the new Viking sketch, it is looking cool, the first thing that stands out to me would be the hand holding the axe. I would slightly thin out the shaft a bit as well as widen her grip. As it stands it’s almost a so if the shaft is a wide flat piece of cardboard. And I do kind of get a feeling of unbalance due to her posture, but that could be chalked up to her sitting position, but just wanted to point that out. I’m sure you do this already but perhaps flipping horizontally could give light to any unnoticed issues.
And the skull she is sitting on, maybe this would get cleared up in rendering, but I can’t tell what it is but it looks interesting and I kind of want to see more of it. Maybe making that element clearer at this early stage would help.
Also, is the idea she is sitting in her trophy room? Or did stumble upon some old skeleton graveyard? It might be cool to just make them severed heads as if a fresh battle has concluded perhaps, just a thought.
Good luck with this piece dude!
On the new Viking sketch, it is looking cool, the first thing that stands out to me would be the hand holding the axe. I would slightly thin out the shaft a bit as well as widen her grip. As it stands it’s almost a so if the shaft is a wide flat piece of cardboard. And I do kind of get a feeling of unbalance due to her posture, but that could be chalked up to her sitting position, but just wanted to point that out. I’m sure you do this already but perhaps flipping horizontally could give light to any unnoticed issues.
And the skull she is sitting on, maybe this would get cleared up in rendering, but I can’t tell what it is but it looks interesting and I kind of want to see more of it. Maybe making that element clearer at this early stage would help.
Also, is the idea she is sitting in her trophy room? Or did stumble upon some old skeleton graveyard? It might be cool to just make them severed heads as if a fresh battle has concluded perhaps, just a thought.
Good luck with this piece dude!