01-30-2012, 12:47 PM
Do more composition studies, as far as a movie poster goes the simplicity isn't a wonderful selling point. If this is meant to be a more dark and deadly version then I'd revamp it more, think up many layouts and designs, you want to stop once you've picked the very best one. Also the forms are a bit flat. Your faces could use some studies as well. Keep at it, you have time. :]
Study hard!
Study hard!
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