02-29-2024, 08:41 AM
Great to see all the recent studies. Those film screen caps look very good. This one caught my eye: http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/attachme...ltron1.jpg
The gray paper form studies look good but seem rushed. While no one can dispute your work ethic — I suggest slowing down a little and really understanding each study.
Instead of doing oodles of them - I'd suggest just a page or two of concentrated study — where you're really working at understanding form and lighting and blending with a stump or finger or cloth etc between values.
Also your shadows don't have much or little reflected light and many generally have overly strong edges.
Anywho — your tireless work and willingness to seek advice are to be admired.
Looking forward to seeing more from you
The gray paper form studies look good but seem rushed. While no one can dispute your work ethic — I suggest slowing down a little and really understanding each study.
Instead of doing oodles of them - I'd suggest just a page or two of concentrated study — where you're really working at understanding form and lighting and blending with a stump or finger or cloth etc between values.
Also your shadows don't have much or little reflected light and many generally have overly strong edges.
Anywho — your tireless work and willingness to seek advice are to be admired.
Looking forward to seeing more from you