Trying to emulate a style

[Geffron]

The link work it was never a problem it trying to take your perspective that the issue.

I will try to give you a critic when i find time but i am busy right now.

One quick thing you can improve is filling your color there spot you miss aswell as cleaning up overshot line that cross other line.I dont see any of the example doing such thing.But i have seen style that use this in the outline if my memory is correct and you talk about sketchyness so maybe it something you are going for.

thanks i'll wait for the reply, I'll double check the spots and overshot lines next time.