08-06-2024, 05:16 AM
Hey, I went through your sketchbook, your art's pretty great. Sorry I don't have much to say specifically about the enlightenment pic as I'm not good at critique, but I saw several of your paintings in general are drawn straight on so they are very symmetrical. That's kind of boring to look at in my opinion, I think you would benefit from doing more dynamic angles. I see you say that yourself on page 37 too. I do get that for some images symmetry can be hard to avoid (and I know I'm guilty of symmetry in some of my own art, I'm trying to get better about it).
I also think you use a bit too much of a saturated (often yellow) glow in many paintings (not talking about your recent Batman piece, but for example, Poison Ivy). Just my personal opinion you are free to disregard, I do think your art is very good on the whole.
I also think you use a bit too much of a saturated (often yellow) glow in many paintings (not talking about your recent Batman piece, but for example, Poison Ivy). Just my personal opinion you are free to disregard, I do think your art is very good on the whole.