12-07-2024, 05:53 PM
JosephCow: Thank you, glad to be back! Great point with the face, love what you did with your draw over as well. Just incorporated it something similar, hopefully it's an improvement. Great point about the feet, just enlarged them hopefully it looks more natural now!
darktiste: Great feedback! Enlarged the feet as Joseph pointed out. The angel wings are a great suggestion as well, works very well compositionally and just incorporated them. I think I'll keep the halo for now as it helps make the face the focal point which is a good thing IMO!
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I applied the feedback mentioned and tried to make the pose a bit more dynamic, hopefully it's an improvement. Any final input on the sketch would be appreciated before I begin the painting process!
darktiste: Great feedback! Enlarged the feet as Joseph pointed out. The angel wings are a great suggestion as well, works very well compositionally and just incorporated them. I think I'll keep the halo for now as it helps make the face the focal point which is a good thing IMO!
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I applied the feedback mentioned and tried to make the pose a bit more dynamic, hopefully it's an improvement. Any final input on the sketch would be appreciated before I begin the painting process!