05-23-2025, 05:18 AM
Good changes on the mermaid! In the earlier iterations the intense blue light and orange light was a bit too intense so it stole a little bit of attention, now it's a lot more harmonious. On your latest sketch, sexy demon mommy hehe! It's a pretty symmetrical composition which isn't bad in and of itself but you could make it a bit more interesting by breaking up the symmetry just a bit in places. I think giving the guitar an asymetric design is a good choice from a composition point of view. With that said I know nothing about guitars and brands and what is good and what isn't haha! For the background you could have one of the colums be destroyed or damaged, or a bigger pile of rubble on one side and less so on the other. Just throwing my ideas out there :D Cool to see!