03-02-2026, 11:05 PM
(03-02-2026, 11:03 AM)darktiste Wrote: Those hand need more work way they to flat in term of lighting and they leak texture take some reference of the style you trying to achieve. The lighting is questionable. How is it value lighter on the bottom side of her breast yet darker on top will she having a magic light a few centimeter to the side. The bustier need value adjustment. Always design with light in mind that what elevate the work. Do light thumbnail to test the lighting if necessary . Dont leave composition and value to luck. Her left eye is buldging out of the socket compare to the right one in term of perspective remember the eye sit inside the eye socket.The upper eye lid crease also dont extend all around the length of the eye they kinda parallel the shape of the eye.
Hey! Thank you for your feedback, I agree with all your statements and missed the mark. I rendered out the hands more (especially her left hand) and added more magic/blue light on the top of her breast aswell as added a darker oulineunder the top lid of her right eye so it looks better in place. The eyecreases where smoothed out so they don't look connected.
I will also take the advice of doing light thumbnails before starting on a serious piece.
If there is anything you feel I didn't understand/missed out on, feel free to let me know or do a paintover of my artwork if it helps you explain what you had in mind :)