10-07-2012, 01:49 PM
Nice stuff in here Arthur, awesome studies :)
With your personal stuff your figures seem pretty stiff, I see you're doing a lot of figure drawings but you might want to try quick gesture studies to help get a looser feel of your figures from imagination.
Also a lot of your stuff has sharp edges, even where there shouldn't be. Sharp edges are really nice, I know I need to work on getting sharper ones in my own pieces. But with sharpness everywhere there's really no place for the eyes to rest. Try to keep the sharp lines just on the focal point of the piece and have it slowly get softer away from it, might help with that :)
Your rendering and lighting in your pieces looks awesome though, keep it up :)
With your personal stuff your figures seem pretty stiff, I see you're doing a lot of figure drawings but you might want to try quick gesture studies to help get a looser feel of your figures from imagination.
Also a lot of your stuff has sharp edges, even where there shouldn't be. Sharp edges are really nice, I know I need to work on getting sharper ones in my own pieces. But with sharpness everywhere there's really no place for the eyes to rest. Try to keep the sharp lines just on the focal point of the piece and have it slowly get softer away from it, might help with that :)
Your rendering and lighting in your pieces looks awesome though, keep it up :)