10-13-2012, 02:13 PM
Your line art looks great! I was reading your back story and felt that the character looks SO alien that is hard to imagine him here on earth, if you gave him/her small characteristics of some commonly known animals it may help the illusion that there is an unknown race living in New York Central Park. I might try to lower the rib cage a little, He also looks like he is wearing pants. Hope any of this helps.
Eric
www.elmstreetart.com
Eric
www.elmstreetart.com
Eric
Elmstreetart.com
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