10-13-2012, 09:45 PM
hey man, i really like his expression. i think the main problem here is that, his face and chest/hand area are the same in regards to contrast, so they are competing. maybe push the face back into the shadow. also his chest is to narrow in my opinion.
i made a little overpaint.
![[Image: KoAoq.jpg]](http://i.imgur.com/KoAoq.jpg)
rescaled the head (45,001st time! :D ), rescaled the chest to make i a bit wider and pushed the head into the shadow. then i decided to put more emphasis on his blue eyes, but that is maybe too much. after that i saw his is crying. is that a narrative decision or did you do it because it felt cool (like i did it with the eyes :D ) because i seems kinda weird that he is covered in blood but a single tear is rolling down his cheek. or is he maybe an instrumentalized hypnotized marionette of a killer master mind doing hits against his will? maybe you should clearify your vision of the character, because a clear vision can greatly help when trying to finalize an image.
cheers,
Flo
i made a little overpaint.
rescaled the head (45,001st time! :D ), rescaled the chest to make i a bit wider and pushed the head into the shadow. then i decided to put more emphasis on his blue eyes, but that is maybe too much. after that i saw his is crying. is that a narrative decision or did you do it because it felt cool (like i did it with the eyes :D ) because i seems kinda weird that he is covered in blood but a single tear is rolling down his cheek. or is he maybe an instrumentalized hypnotized marionette of a killer master mind doing hits against his will? maybe you should clearify your vision of the character, because a clear vision can greatly help when trying to finalize an image.
cheers,
Flo