10-15-2012, 04:42 AM
I really like the tower sketch. Very good color choices and nice composition. Also it's a piece in which you didn't go too far with the contrast (which would be my main issue in your paintings).
The matte one is really nice too, but it would probably be good to adjust warms on the right side, since it makes it quite visible that there are separate pieces ot the collage. Also reducing the contrast in background right side would help to add air perspective closer to that on the left side.
Just few words of critique, since I believe it's more useful than blind priseing.
Anyway, keep up the good work!
The matte one is really nice too, but it would probably be good to adjust warms on the right side, since it makes it quite visible that there are separate pieces ot the collage. Also reducing the contrast in background right side would help to add air perspective closer to that on the left side.
Just few words of critique, since I believe it's more useful than blind priseing.
Anyway, keep up the good work!
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