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bloodports #3 Nausicaa jake gumbleton
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02-01-2012, 07:02 AM
Looks pretty good so far. My only suggestion is to maybe make part of the composition look slightly less deliberate. I'm thinking especially with the planes encircling her head - since they're in the sky, maybe seeing more of the underside of them would look good
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bloodports #3 Nausicaa jake gumbleton - by Jake gumbleton - 02-01-2012, 05:35 AM
RE: bloodports #3 Nausicaa jake gumbleton - by CanisPanthera - 02-01-2012, 07:02 AM
RE: bloodports #3 Nausicaa jake gumbleton - by Jagged - 02-01-2012, 07:57 AM
RE: bloodports #3 Nausicaa jake gumbleton - by Jake gumbleton - 02-04-2012, 10:31 PM
RE: bloodports #3 Nausicaa jake gumbleton - by Jake gumbleton - 02-07-2012, 11:33 PM
RE: bloodports #3 Nausicaa jake gumbleton - by Jake gumbleton - 02-09-2012, 11:33 PM
RE: bloodports #3 Nausicaa jake gumbleton - by Tooth - 02-10-2012, 12:17 AM

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