Anatomy of a Pinup - Class Closed

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Ok - just started making a few adjustments as per Shyam's crit:

-adjusted background (two versions, both with more width, the other with added height - added height doesn't keep you focused in the right places -.- )
-adjusted pose - re-created the pose in the mirror, found a happy inbetween with drawing to add more stability/balance but also keep the exagerated graphic silhouette from previous. Also adjusted her right arm, more in perspective (still working on it)
-adjusted right hand gun size to make a little smaller
-added some design elements to suit
-added some design elements to BG
-tried to keep the flying creatures to two and bigger, which I felt ruined the exagerated camera angle/feeling of depth. Reduced the number of smaller ones, I think feels less like birds now
-playing with sexier face/hair combo in second version - just starting to see what I could do

That's it for now, back to it tomorrow afternoon - likely to start adding some tonal passes

crits away!