11-24-2012, 11:30 PM
Great crit from monkeybread. It is beautifully rendered. The only thing I would add to the crit would be to use reference photos, the armor looks a little plastic and there are a few anatomy issues you could address. The composition needs the most work, use the background to help tell your story and enhance the composition, keep it up you have mad skills!
Eric
Elmstreetart.com
Elmstreetart.com