11-25-2012, 05:25 AM
Nice to see some new work from you A, I can't see anything wrong with this piece but I know it'll look good when you're done with it. I did however, tried to do a quick paintover just to see where I would take this piece if I was at this stage. Hope it is of some help. I think by adding another light source and maybe a character, you can add some more elements to play around with. Maybe this big monster follows light and destroys anything with warm colours. Could be something to do with him being from the cold and hating anything that destroys his peace. You can tell what he's going for next. Either ways, great composition and can't wait to see it finished. :)
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