Bloodsport # 5 - Spirited Away

[Samothrace]

I liked the #9 composition, but in this latest sketch you've lost almost everything that made it great: the concentric circles from the top of the image to the bottom. There's one making up Yubaba's hair, one for her face, one and a half made from Haku's body, Chihiro's face makes up another. The other aspect lost was that great negative shape around them. Be careful when fleshing out your thumbnails not to lose the compositional theme of the thumbnail.

And thanks for posting that title image!

Excellent feedback, thank you! I took that into mind and fixed up the composition quite a bit (and started adding color).