12-12-2012, 07:14 PM
Hey Marius,
I know u from Nightdrawers, though I havent been there in a long while.
Nice sketches, I like a lot the armors, the bag carrying horned animal, and I think the first two anatomy studies are the nicest(esp. the lines on the second one)
I'll jump right in with some things I noticed:
- the sepia anatomy studies - I think would have benefited from a more rigurous construction, and the neck on the second one feels a bit disjoined from the spine; also there should be a better twist sugestion between the hips and thoracic cage.
- I like how u rendered the elefant studies, and I think that the rendering of the following insectoids have the black and whites a little to .. "strident", it's maybe more of a personal taste but I think white( almost while) whould have been used better for highlights instead of something similar to contour lines and maybe a little less blacks, with more of a grayscale gradation.
- the neck on the last "Matei" seems olso a bit awkward, maybe a bit too long, too straight and too thick connecting to the cranium, I think a sternocloidomastoid suggestion would have helped figure it out better.
Hope it helped and keep it up. I'm looking forward to ur next posts.
I know u from Nightdrawers, though I havent been there in a long while.
Nice sketches, I like a lot the armors, the bag carrying horned animal, and I think the first two anatomy studies are the nicest(esp. the lines on the second one)
I'll jump right in with some things I noticed:
- the sepia anatomy studies - I think would have benefited from a more rigurous construction, and the neck on the second one feels a bit disjoined from the spine; also there should be a better twist sugestion between the hips and thoracic cage.
- I like how u rendered the elefant studies, and I think that the rendering of the following insectoids have the black and whites a little to .. "strident", it's maybe more of a personal taste but I think white( almost while) whould have been used better for highlights instead of something similar to contour lines and maybe a little less blacks, with more of a grayscale gradation.
- the neck on the last "Matei" seems olso a bit awkward, maybe a bit too long, too straight and too thick connecting to the cranium, I think a sternocloidomastoid suggestion would have helped figure it out better.
Hope it helped and keep it up. I'm looking forward to ur next posts.