Portfolio Class- Character Development!

[emooi]

Hey guys,

First, thanks Dan for the crits! Really helped allot as always.
@jmob thanks dude, rocking it till it's done :)

Could t spend as much time on it as i wanted to. i had a busy week at work and home. i finally could sit and draw this evening. Still not done so i push another couple of hours into the night.
Yesterday i had some dinner with my girlfriend and her parents and i told them, he why don't we grab a bite at an Asian restaurant :p Once there i could sniff up some inspiration and have a good meal at the same time! I saw a geisha with strings of fabric wrapped around her arm like tentacles. Almost if they try to catch you. For my "foxy lady" i incorporated that idea and punt the "tentacles" in a sort of Z shape to guide you're eyes around the canvas. Also worked in the crits from Dan.
Her hand in the back is smaller, Asian face, crown, fox stitching on the dress, ropes wrapped around her waist and changed her hands so it doesn't looked cmd+c cmd+v ;)



Think I'm going with black, gold and red for her clothes. Trying that later this night.
Ow, i also added wind going through her clothes so its more dynamic and matches the "tentacles"

Hope you guys like it, any crit is more than welcome.

Erik

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@Nimao I think it looks better if you put the snakes head on the left side of her hand, extend the body :)

@Ptimm Looks great man, the only thing that i would change is the lower dress part.
You've got you're wind coming from the right hand side. so the lower right side dress shouldt open to the right. i hope it's understandable what I'm saying :)