12-31-2012, 01:27 AM
i think his left leg looks as if it's on something, not on the ground. Observe somebody standing in this pose and make some quick sketch...
i think the middleground is too big and empty. i mean...You have to add many things to fill it and that will probably pull the eye away from tha main character.
maybe You should bring the horizon line lower in order to overlay some unnecessary space.
other than that the only problem is that it's not finished...
just continue and let's see what will turn out! ;>
i think the middleground is too big and empty. i mean...You have to add many things to fill it and that will probably pull the eye away from tha main character.
maybe You should bring the horizon line lower in order to overlay some unnecessary space.
other than that the only problem is that it's not finished...
just continue and let's see what will turn out! ;>