01-05-2013, 04:12 PM
Hey Jaik, you've put in a lot of work and that's awesome, so keep that theme going.
Briefly from what I saw I'd say more anatomy studies are needed. I don't mean drawing the muscle groups and naming them (you've already done that) but more life drawing and anatomy study in general. You do quite a bit of character stuff but your general anatomy proportions still seem to be off. I'd say you'd neealso d to put a bit of work in on your gestures first in order to nail poses before you go into rendering.
In terms of rendering I'd say you still need to practice and push the idea of rendering around your forms more especially with the characters as they tend to look quite flat.
Next up would be more material studies and application.
Love the mechanika studies by the way that stuff is solid! :)
Keep it up
Briefly from what I saw I'd say more anatomy studies are needed. I don't mean drawing the muscle groups and naming them (you've already done that) but more life drawing and anatomy study in general. You do quite a bit of character stuff but your general anatomy proportions still seem to be off. I'd say you'd neealso d to put a bit of work in on your gestures first in order to nail poses before you go into rendering.
In terms of rendering I'd say you still need to practice and push the idea of rendering around your forms more especially with the characters as they tend to look quite flat.
Next up would be more material studies and application.
Love the mechanika studies by the way that stuff is solid! :)
Keep it up