Portfolio Class- Character Development!

[Jmob]

So I decided not to change the face. All other alterations looked dumb with the grungy hair she has. having a face with makeup or bushy brows didn't look right at all. Well I was either doing it wrong or there is some reason it isn't having the kind of unity i'm looking for. Anyways, Here's a sketchy colored version of Morgane. Really fought with this one to make sense and to really push the look of "egyptian" beyond the egyptian stereotype. It was really hard and I don't know if I succeeded. I don't know if I lost the egyptian esque feel of the piece. I guess that's why I didn't really push this to finish--still unsure of whether I should take a step back and do some redesigning or if I should add more detail to get the story across. Anyways, the notes in the painting address the things that are more obvious atm... Critiques are VERY welcomed. In fact, I don't think I should move on with Morgane until I get an in depth crit. Keep on going strong everyone. Also, Thomas, glad you are feeling better.