02-07-2012, 05:33 AM
Number 1 and 3 say a lot more about the film than 2 so I'd go for either of those two. I like 3 but I think it's because you've put more values in it than the other, would like to see that one pushed more before you pick!
With 3 it'd be nice to see some of Kamaji's arms coming out like a spider, because that's his most interesting feature and they're almost hidden here. Same with the sludgey one, have him lean over more like he's trying to reach down to them. I think that'd help if you're going for the narrative of the terrified children, with the characters posed as if they're reaching down to get them.
Good work!
With 3 it'd be nice to see some of Kamaji's arms coming out like a spider, because that's his most interesting feature and they're almost hidden here. Same with the sludgey one, have him lean over more like he's trying to reach down to them. I think that'd help if you're going for the narrative of the terrified children, with the characters posed as if they're reaching down to get them.
Good work!