Could Really Use Some Advice on This New Piece
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The basics of composition will answer that question for you, the top piece has the blue focal points running down the right hand side which destroys your composition. Try a middle ground between the two you have, use the rule of thirds to get started.

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RE: Could Really Use Some Advice on This New Piece - by Elmst - 01-25-2013, 10:03 AM

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