Critique/Paintover needed

[davidtheartist]

Here is my thinking on it.

First I adjusted the colours. The blue took away from the scene more than added. I defined the light source then began to paint more loosely. I thought about defining the silhouette, making the character and his armour stronger, and things like this. I felt that his head pose could mean a lot of things but it must mean hes in some kinda of thought on where he is. So I left it and made it more dramatic.

Let me know if you have any questions!