01-29-2013, 08:01 AM
Nice start. I love the eye, lips, and nose sketches you've been doing.
As far as your line work in concerned, they lack confidence in their flow, and shading. A lot of the drawings look scratchy in some parts, and sloppy in others. It makes hard to read the picture as intended, although, the values themselves seem to be quite good IMO.
Also, keep proportions in mind when drawing figures. I know it can be hard when doing gestures under a specified time limit. I've noticed a lot of the torsos are warped and elongated in a few of these.
I'd still say my favorite things in here have to be those eyes, lips, and nose sketches. A majority of them are by far some of the cleanest, and have some really nice pencil values in them. I'd really love to see you apply the same level of cleanliness, if not more, in your drawings.
Hope this helps. Keep it up! :]
As far as your line work in concerned, they lack confidence in their flow, and shading. A lot of the drawings look scratchy in some parts, and sloppy in others. It makes hard to read the picture as intended, although, the values themselves seem to be quite good IMO.
Also, keep proportions in mind when drawing figures. I know it can be hard when doing gestures under a specified time limit. I've noticed a lot of the torsos are warped and elongated in a few of these.
I'd still say my favorite things in here have to be those eyes, lips, and nose sketches. A majority of them are by far some of the cleanest, and have some really nice pencil values in them. I'd really love to see you apply the same level of cleanliness, if not more, in your drawings.
Hope this helps. Keep it up! :]