01-29-2013, 08:59 AM
Wow, you're line work in your studies are really nice. I'm pretty jealous, haha. It's so clean.
In the paintings you've got on here I noticed that some of the values are on the brighter side of things, and could go much darker in some areas. A lot of them are just lacking volume, and they appear flat. Your skin in the paintings could probably do with a bit more color in it, a few more reds, pinks, and richer colors overall. It doesn't seem like you have determined a light sourced in many of these paintings either, or the light source isn't working hard enough. As a result they appear dimly light, if at all, or by some sort of indirect light source. This is probably another reason some of them are looking flatter than they should.
Your lines are you strong point at the moment, keep hitting the values, color and lighting hard. I'd suggest a bunch of studies revolving around these things. Hope this was of some help. :]
In the paintings you've got on here I noticed that some of the values are on the brighter side of things, and could go much darker in some areas. A lot of them are just lacking volume, and they appear flat. Your skin in the paintings could probably do with a bit more color in it, a few more reds, pinks, and richer colors overall. It doesn't seem like you have determined a light sourced in many of these paintings either, or the light source isn't working hard enough. As a result they appear dimly light, if at all, or by some sort of indirect light source. This is probably another reason some of them are looking flatter than they should.
Your lines are you strong point at the moment, keep hitting the values, color and lighting hard. I'd suggest a bunch of studies revolving around these things. Hope this was of some help. :]