01-29-2013, 07:18 PM
Hey Igor,
I think you fixed the center of gravity issue with the figure quite well. In terms of the figure I would say watch the perspective of the hammer in relation to the figure. The (hammer) head is fine, but the handle is too flat on.
The comp is nice but I see some issues with contradicting perspectives between the background and foreground, The angle of the ground plane and the mid and foreground statues makes it appear that we are looking at the scene from some height above them but then if you look at the horizon line and the pyramid, the eye level of the viewer is actually fairly low. Also the figure is pretty much directly parallel to our eye level with no adjustment for either perspective. I think you need to pick what elements you want to keep and draw in a quick grid based on that and redraw everything else that is out of line with it. I'd suggest redrawing the environment to match the figure as the figure is probably more effort to tweak :)
Hope that helps
I think you fixed the center of gravity issue with the figure quite well. In terms of the figure I would say watch the perspective of the hammer in relation to the figure. The (hammer) head is fine, but the handle is too flat on.
The comp is nice but I see some issues with contradicting perspectives between the background and foreground, The angle of the ground plane and the mid and foreground statues makes it appear that we are looking at the scene from some height above them but then if you look at the horizon line and the pyramid, the eye level of the viewer is actually fairly low. Also the figure is pretty much directly parallel to our eye level with no adjustment for either perspective. I think you need to pick what elements you want to keep and draw in a quick grid based on that and redraw everything else that is out of line with it. I'd suggest redrawing the environment to match the figure as the figure is probably more effort to tweak :)
Hope that helps