Critique! I wanna get better!
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I really like the design of the character, a very original idea. Here is my 2 cents for you:

1. Don't stress about 4 light sources, it can frustrate and confuse you. If you simplified to a single ambient source or that plush a direction then you might have an easier go of it.

2. You are on the right path with separating the background in terms of sharp/blurry. I would try lightening up the background to really push that sense of depth.

3. Soften up those brush strokes, try using what you have as an underpainting and then use a low opacity soft round to really paint those materials, highlights and shadows.

Hope this was helpful. :)
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Critique! I wanna get better! - by Markdotea - 01-28-2013, 09:58 AM
RE: Critique! I wanna get better! - by Chiritsu - 01-28-2013, 07:03 PM
RE: Critique! I wanna get better! - by Markdotea - 01-28-2013, 10:57 PM
RE: Critique! I wanna get better! - by Chiritsu - 01-30-2013, 09:05 AM
RE: Critique! I wanna get better! - by Markdotea - 01-30-2013, 10:50 AM
RE: Critique! I wanna get better! - by Chiritsu - 01-30-2013, 11:22 AM
RE: Critique! I wanna get better! - by Shaun Patterson - 01-30-2013, 11:42 AM
RE: Critique! I wanna get better! - by Markdotea - 02-02-2013, 12:18 AM

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