do overs

[CKL]

Gangster- Looking really rad with the colors! Something to chew on, would the image benefit by pulling in tighter on the view. Right now some of the space around them seems extraneous. And, are we still looking at a mutiny scene? Right now, at least to me, it reads as the two guys having an oh shit moment falling off. Again, really cool movement and color.

I know you originally had a closer view, so the pan out may have been a conscious decision.