02-03-2013, 08:21 PM
Have you tried posting in the crit section? You'll probably get more feedback. In terms of comp you dont really seem to overlap objects much which makes it look like everything is just drawn around the character. I think you have jumped ahead a bit. If you want to nail the comp, why not do at least 5 or 6 thumbnails that are all very different and pick the best one from those.