02-10-2013, 01:39 AM
Hey, well I'm by no means a art master in any form, but I thought I would pass on a thing or two which didnt look right to me. The muscles in his left arm seem to be twisted awkwardly- I havent done enough studies myself to be able to say what is wrong with them, but it looks like he has a block of muscles which would stop his arm bending.
Also, I feel slightly confused where the elbow is- the arm just seems to extend at the same width, until it suddenly scoops in at the wrist. That, and I'm not really sure what is going on with his fingers and their positions.
The lighting on his face is incredible so well done for that!
Apart from my little nags, I think the piece is coming on very nicely so really well done :D
Hope I was as helpful as I can at my level! Heh :)
Also, I feel slightly confused where the elbow is- the arm just seems to extend at the same width, until it suddenly scoops in at the wrist. That, and I'm not really sure what is going on with his fingers and their positions.
The lighting on his face is incredible so well done for that!
Apart from my little nags, I think the piece is coming on very nicely so really well done :D
Hope I was as helpful as I can at my level! Heh :)