02-10-2012, 12:17 AM
This is looking pretty cool, I like the colour scheme!
At the moment I'd recommend working on her face, you for sure should think about the expression, particularly the eyes, they should be "saying" something to the viewer. She is a complex character with much emotion going on and at the moment it's not really being conveyed to us.
Also I'm not sure it's necessary to have her in the background as well? Maybe one of the baddies in front of the death robot thing to counterbalance master Yupa - and have him standing in front of the windmills and such, could be more interesting. Anyway food for thought. It's looking cool so far!
At the moment I'd recommend working on her face, you for sure should think about the expression, particularly the eyes, they should be "saying" something to the viewer. She is a complex character with much emotion going on and at the moment it's not really being conveyed to us.
Also I'm not sure it's necessary to have her in the background as well? Maybe one of the baddies in front of the death robot thing to counterbalance master Yupa - and have him standing in front of the windmills and such, could be more interesting. Anyway food for thought. It's looking cool so far!