02-10-2012, 12:30 AM
Cool so far. It's a interesting composition and nice layout, honestly though areas do look a bit lazy, sorry to say - you still have another day right.
I think to push it you gotta REF some stuff, bronze/metal, her face, his face. Her head is looking very small in comparison to her body! I think the finish on the Ohmu could be pushed, with it being the centre piece here. I am a little unsure about the plain purple bg and blurred dots, looks kinda christmassy or something!
Also I noticed you used Toxic Jungle, I thought it was "the sea of corruption" - I think that sounds better!
I think to push it you gotta REF some stuff, bronze/metal, her face, his face. Her head is looking very small in comparison to her body! I think the finish on the Ohmu could be pushed, with it being the centre piece here. I am a little unsure about the plain purple bg and blurred dots, looks kinda christmassy or something!
Also I noticed you used Toxic Jungle, I thought it was "the sea of corruption" - I think that sounds better!