Adzerak's book o' sketches

[Mr. Toodles]

wow so many gestures Good job with all of that dude.

I like how you transitioned to doing tone, or at least that's what I think you are doing. If that is the case, then my suggestion would be to try start subordinating some of those small tones for the sake of the larger two tones black and white.

Here's a short paragraph with an example by andrew loomis http://gurneyjourney.blogspot.com/2009/0...tones.html