02-10-2012, 07:34 AM
Looks great so far! I like that Haku's body leads your eye around the piece. My one comment is that I think you've set up a really interesting lighting situation for yourself but you aren't making the most of it. Push the values of the warm light coming from the lanterns on either side of her, really darken the shadows of your forms wherever the light doesn't shine, and have the moon/stars serve as a cool lightsource from above.
Just a suggestion :)
Just a suggestion :)