is this composition good?

[beetlejuice]

Hey guys, previously i did an image with a fallen angel in a separate thread. I got some really good critique and want to apply them to a newer image.

i hope you can come with me through this journey of awesomeness and finish something amazing!

here is the start of my image. if anyone could tell me how the comp is atm and tell me if anything is wrong at this point i.e the legs being to fat, the hand in a awkward position, or the shoulders are weird

thanks.. here we go!